The dampness of the castle moat smelled of old silt and dead carp floating belly-up among the water hyacinths. Kyoto swallowed the noises of the night with a jaw of wet stone and dark tiles. Julián drifted aimlessly along the edge of the Cyclopean walls, the soles of his shoes worn down by the asphalt, his chest compressed by a stubborn insomnia that had been scratching at his temples ever since the transoceanic flight. The paper lantern of a distant streetlamp cast an orange tremor over the centuries-old stones, sketching long shadows that seemed to stretch out and catch at his ankles.
It was then that he saw her. She was huddled against the base of a black pine, her knees pulled tight against her chest, wearing a faded-print kimono that blended into the grime of the earth. She was sobbing with a dry sound, a mechanical hiccup that drove itself into the night like a rusted nail. Julián halted. Common sense—that last vestige of his orderly life in Madrid—screamed at him to keep walking, to recognize that the alleys of Japan harbored an ancient solitude no foreigner had any business disturbing. But the weeping had a texture so forlorn, so raw, that it compelled him to draw near.
I. The Fold of the Skin
Julián's sneakers crunched over the fine gravel. The girl did not raise her head. Her shoulders trembled beneath the cheap fabric of the kimono. The air smelled of stagnant damp and the sweetish, almost nauseating aroma of pork broth drifting from a distant street stall beyond the grove. Julián cleared his throat, groping for a word in his clumsy Japanese, a verbal refuge to shatter the thick heaviness of the air.
“Are you alright? Do you need help?” he whispered, crouching down until he was level with her drooping shoulders.
The girl stopped hiccuping. Slowly, with an articulated stiffness that called to mind old fairground automatons, she lifted her face. Julián reached out a hand to steady her arm, ready to offer a paper tissue. His fingertips brushed empty air just as the girl swept her open palm across her forehead, dragging it down in a fluid, unpassionate motion over her cheeks, the bridge of her nose, and her chin.
There was no resistance. No blood, no torn flesh. The skin yielded like warm wax beneath the heat of her palm, melting into a canvas that was white, smooth, and implacable. Where dark eyes pleading for help had been a moment before, there remained only a uniform surface, slick as unfired porcelain, devoid of a single pore, stripped of every trace of humanity. The air turned to lead in Julián’s lungs. He tried to scream, but his throat went dry, blocked by a sudden spasm that choked his ability to swallow.
The silence was not an empty space; it was a heavy presence, a crouching animal breathing against the nape of his neck.
He stumbled backward over his own heels, crashing down onto his back against the damp gravel, which tore the skin of his palms. When he looked up again, shaking with an involuntary fury that rattled his teeth, the girl was still there, static, her blank face turned precisely toward the spot where he writhed in the dirt.
II. The Noodle Stall
Panic drove him to run. His legs felt like iron beams as he tore through the labyrinth of cobbled alleys, seeking the sanctuary of neon lights flickering in the distance, casting greenish and magenta glints across dark wooden facades. His heart battered against his ribs with the force of a pneumatic drill. He rounded a corner and nearly collided with the cart of a street vendor selling soba noodles.
White steam rose from the smoking metal pot, venting a thick reek of animal fat, fermented soy sauce, and chopped scallions. Behind the counter, a stoop-shouldered man in a greasy apron stirred the broth with long bamboo chopsticks. Seeing Julián appear, eyes dilated and breathing broken, the cook raised his head with a lethal, almost insulting calm.
“Oishī desu ka? Everything alright, foreign customer?” the man asked in a voice that sounded like gravel scraping against the bottom of a metal pail.
Julián opened his mouth, trying to point back toward the dark alley he had fled. He wanted to speak of the girl, of the erased face, of the texture of flesh turned to rice paper. But the vendor did not wait for an answer. With the same indifferent gesture he had used to stir the noodles, the man raised his right hand, pressed his open palm against his forehead, and dragged it downward with force.
The skin of his face stretched like a wet sheet, blurring the wrinkles of old age, the folds of his eyes, and the corners of his lips, until nothing remained beneath the cart’s yellow bulb but an absolute white oval.
Julián could run no longer. His knees gave out entirely and he collapsed onto the cold asphalt, right before the steaming vapor of the still-boiling broth. All around him, the paper streetlamps began to extinguish one by one with a dull click, plunging him into a dark where the only sound was the thick bubbling of the soup and the brush of an invisible hand beginning to stroke his own forehead.
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On what myth or dread reality is this tale based?
Se inspira en el Noppera-bō, una creature del folclore japonés que asusta a los transeúntes adoptando la apariencia de conocidos antes de revelar su rostro totalmente liso.
Are there documented real cases similar to this story?
No real cases of physical transformation exist, but psychiatry documents Cotard’s delusion, wherein the patient believes they have lost parts of their body or their face.
What does the ending of the story mean?
It represents the absolute erasure of identity and the slow, creeping invasion of terror into the traveler’s psyche, trapped within an endless loop of depersonalization.
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